Friday 5 June 2020

Writing

Graceful giraffe Cheeky giraffes gracefully walk out of their cage. A very cheeky one came up and smirked at the camera. They gracefully walk up the stairs. Then they stop and look. They soon noticed that there was a pool so one of the giraffes found a thing that hung from the ceiling. The giraffes hanged on to each other while the other one swings them over so they can do poses and dive in. They patiently waited for their turn. The giraffes run as fast as they can so they have more time to do their trick. Soon one more joins and hangs from the other diving board. They carefully get out of the pool, they gracefully lean down and have a drink. Then they have a few more goes. Then they hear a noise, they stop for a second then they run as fast as they can back to their cage.

2 comments:

  1. Hello Tilly
    I'm Harrison. I love your story about the giraffes. I like it because you used lots of describing words.

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  2. hi Tilly and Harrison
    It's Rowan
    I love the video it's really funny but why did the giraffes Escape prison? your writing is really good and you used heaps of describing words.

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