Friday 18 June 2021

My writing from yesterday.

We are writing procedure writing in our class Yesterday and here is mine.

10 comments:

  1. Hi Tilly this looks really good did you try and make it or did you find it online. Did you like it?

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    1. I can't take all the credit because a youtuber Karina made it in one of her videos. have a very good day bye:)

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    2. I forgot to add it is delicious.

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  2. This sounds like a delish sandwich. I like how you clearly explained how to make it. A great set of instructions.

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  3. Hi Tilly did you make it yourself or with someone else? but have you tryed it? this looks really cool good job

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    1. I can't take all the credit because a youtuber Karina made it in one of her videos. I have tried it it's really good. Thanks have a good day:)

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  4. Hi Tilly I am from Marshland school. I love your recipe. And guess what in my class we are doing procedure writing too.
    Bye

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