My name is Fiona and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
You’ve written a great comment! I like that you start with the positives, listing that you like the dark colours Ruby has chosen, and then you offer a helpful suggestion for an idea that Ruby could try next time. Ka pai!
Next time, you might like to ask the learner a question in your comment, as this could start a comment thread (where you reply to one and other), which is a great way to form connections with other student bloggers.
Remember, when you check out some of the other bloggers’ Summer Learning Journey posts and leave another positive, helpful and thoughtful comment, you will receive bonus points if you submit a link to your published comment using this form.
I look forward to seeing all your future blog posts! Did you see the SLJ Nanogirl activities? They look really fun!
Kia ora Matilda,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Fiona and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
You’ve written a great comment! I like that you start with the positives, listing that you like the dark colours Ruby has chosen, and then you offer a helpful suggestion for an idea that Ruby could try next time. Ka pai!
Next time, you might like to ask the learner a question in your comment, as this could start a comment thread (where you reply to one and other), which is a great way to form connections with other student bloggers.
Remember, when you check out some of the other bloggers’ Summer Learning Journey posts and leave another positive, helpful and thoughtful comment, you will receive bonus points if you submit a link to your published comment using this form.
I look forward to seeing all your future blog posts! Did you see the SLJ Nanogirl activities? They look really fun!
Ka kite anō,
Fiona
thank you for telling me about the bonus points and giving me a helpful thoughtful and positive comment. from Tilly/Matilda
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